rockhopper72
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A while back I posted some notes on the science of childcare in response to some requests on this sub. People occasionally post links to it here, and I recently saw a (now deleted) post in which people discussed it. A running theme there was that people were skeptical of the research on Quebec that I referenced.
I've revised the article to say more about Quebec, to reference some recent important work and to emphasise some points that got drowned out by the length of the article.
If anyone reads the new version, I would be grateful for concrete feedback on:
I've revised the article to say more about Quebec, to reference some recent important work and to emphasise some points that got drowned out by the length of the article.
If anyone reads the new version, I would be grateful for concrete feedback on:
- Places where you think I have not represented the state of the science accurately. With citations to back up assertions, please.
- Anywhere where I use technical language you don't follow.
- What can I cut? What is not useful to you? Where am I wordy? I've tried hard to be concise, but the article feels much too long.
- A generic comment like "you're oversimplifying the research" is not helpful. "I think X is misleading in light of the fact that paper Y claims Z" is.
- Ad hominem rants about me or the researchers I cite don't help.
- Being doxxed could have career consequences for me, so I have a zero information policy on Reddit. That might frustrate you, but please respect it -- if you don't find the article helpful, you're not obliged to read it or to reply to this post. (It also amazes me when people take personal claims at face value here.)
- I'm not planning to add sections to the article -- it's too long already.